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Sprinting down endless arrays of filth covered halls, grime covered the wooden walls, the floor was covered in dirt and littered with trash and splinters, which made you grateful that you had your shoes on. You turned corners and tried to open doors, only to find out they were all locked. Your breathing was heavy and ragged, since you've been running down this maze for what felt like hours, trying to find an exit. Sweat beaded down your forehead, drenching your face and soaking your hair. Your (color) converses thumped onto the ground each step you took, running deeper into the endless maze of halls in a building you weren't completely familiar with. All you know is that it has been abandon for about a few years. You ran towards another closed door, harshly twisting and turning the handle.

'C'mon, c'mon, c'mon!!' You scowled at the lock handle, slamming you fist against the wall.

"(NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEEE)~~~ COME OUT COME OUT WHERE EVER YOU ARE!!!!" You could feel the blood drain from your face as you heard a all too familiar male's voice call out, insanity lacing his every word, not to far from your location. You cursed, darting off from the opposite direction of his voice. A cackle echoed through out the building, causing you to involuntarily shiver. Adrenaline pumped through your veins, giving you a boost of energy. The sound of heavy, rapid footsteps neared the hall you were in, making you boost your speed towards the end of the long, dim corridor.

"(Nameee)... You can't run forever dear..." He was now in the hallway. That hatchet wielding psychopathic was now in the hall you just left a split second ago, gaining speed as fast as you were running. This was not how you wanted it to end. Luckily this hall was shorter and had two different directions, which gave you a chance to escape him. Dashing past the doors, forgetting to even try them, you spun into the left hall, which was dimmer then any of the other halls, and took large, rapid strides down to the end, making another sharp turn, almost ramming your hip into the corner. That would be bad. You could just faintly make out the maniac's laughter and footsteps from where you were. Which gave you a slight sense of relief. You turn down one more hall, only to abruptly stop in your path. Your blood ran cold, your body froze up, and your (eye color) orbs grew wide.

Dead. End.

The sound of footsteps stopped right behind you, causing you to yelp and spin around, facing the brunette(?) male, his mouth and nose covered by some type of mouth guard, a design on it that looked like a metal smile. His hazel(?) eyes were covered by orange tinted goggles. His frightfully pale skin was mostly hidden by his hoodie, which was a light brown with striped sleeves. Ripped jeans covered his legs, and black and white converses covered his feet. He twitched, a causing a small tick noise to come from his cracking bones. He quickly wrapped his arms around you to keep you from falling to the ground, holding you close to his clothed chest, faces close together.

"Got you." He stated triumphantly, a grin plastered on his unseen lips. You burst out laughing, wrapping your arms around his neck.

"Next time, I want to chase you." You smirked. He chuckled.

"Maybe. Let's just get out of here and go get something to eat. All that running made me hungry." Toby complained, taking your hand with his gloved one, leading the way through the maze of hallways towards the exit.

"Fine. Where do you want to go?" You asked, wiping away the sweat from your forehead with your free hand. He hummed in thought before replying.


You both looked at each other, before bursting out into a fit of laughter, walking down the halls.

"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."


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proxieluver7 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member
me:yay waffles Cx
toby:and pancakes Cx
me:yusssss I luv them
toby:I luv u to toby
I luv ur story Cx
Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  New member
"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."

:D *glomps* ok~ *ties with chains to door* ill eat em for you ;)
Toby: WHAT?!?!?!?!? NO!! *tick tick!*
Me: *runs off to Ihop* 20 second head-start... huff... >_< almost... puufff...
*turns head a bit and sees Toby running after*
Me: wellpp!!!~ *turns into 1/2 dragon and flies the rest of the way* AHA- O_O
Toby: *stuffing face with waffles* What?- mmpph- you so long?
Me: ..... Dont get inbetween Toby and his Waffles... derp T.T
I thought he was going to kill me for a sec
shadowslayer66 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ummmmm well toby you see -whispers quietly- i kinda ate your waffels

Toby:YOU -tick- WHAT -constant ticking-

ohhhhhh shit
sunshineg9 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
(My thoughts during the story) Fuckfuckfuck. Where's my magical disappearing power at. Fuck. So this happens when I'm at a store for two seconds but nkt when i need it!

(Then reads ending)
Haha! Hilarious ! I swear to goodness yku got me into it. Did not expect it at all.
leaf-the-leafeon13 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  New member
Omyfawkingarceusthiswasnotwhatiwasexpecting!!!(pant... pant.)
Mylittlecloney Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2014
Oh god, I have had to eat IHop for breakfast this whole fudging week. Now, when someone says the word pancake or IHop I get all pissy and stuff. DX
sketchnote1 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 1, 2014
What happened afterwards:

*facepalms* Hellz yeah, Toby. We'll get you some effin waffles! *20 minutes later* *walks into Slender Mansion carrying Toby unconscious*

Slender: Sketch? What happened to Toby?!

You guess. Did he a) piss me off to the point of no return, b) go to the bathroom, and I found him beaten up and unconsious, or c) Something only he can get?

Slender: He has no visible injuries, so what's c)?

I whispered quietly, "Overdosed on Maple-Syrup."
CandiProductions Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Candi: OH NO TOBY MIGHT BE IN A SYRUP COMA!! *runs around flailing arms*
Eyeless Jack: Da fuq...
sketchnote1 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
((Try not to laugh at this))

Masky: He- he shut up!? YAAAAAAASSSS, GURL, YAAASSS!

Hoodie: I thought you'd be more worried than this.

Masky: *twerks happily on the wall* YAAASSS!

*brushes hair out of Toby's eyes* My smexy brunette.

???: Maybe now you have a chance with m-

Hell no, BEN!

*BEN is grabbed up in a black glove by the tunic*

Toby: Sketch, promise me you won't date him when I die, please?

We're all immortal, though... Oh... true.

Masky: TWERK IS LIFE! ((#Ratchet Masky))
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