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Sprinting down endless arrays of filth covered halls, grime covered the wooden walls, the floor was covered in dirt and littered with trash and splinters, which made you grateful that you had your shoes on. You turned corners and tried to open doors, only to find out they were all locked. Your breathing was heavy and ragged, since you've been running down this maze for what felt like hours, trying to find an exit. Sweat beaded down your forehead, drenching your face and soaking your hair. Your (color) converses thumped onto the ground each step you took, running deeper into the endless maze of halls in a building you weren't completely familiar with. All you know is that it has been abandon for about a few years. You ran towards another closed door, harshly twisting and turning the handle.

'C'mon, c'mon, c'mon!!' You scowled at the lock handle, slamming you fist against the wall.

"(NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEEE)~~~ COME OUT COME OUT WHERE EVER YOU ARE!!!!" You could feel the blood drain from your face as you heard a all too familiar male's voice call out, insanity lacing his every word, not to far from your location. You cursed, darting off from the opposite direction of his voice. A cackle echoed through out the building, causing you to involuntarily shiver. Adrenaline pumped through your veins, giving you a boost of energy. The sound of heavy, rapid footsteps neared the hall you were in, making you boost your speed towards the end of the long, dim corridor.

"(Nameee)... You can't run forever dear..." He was now in the hallway. That hatchet wielding psychopathic was now in the hall you just left a split second ago, gaining speed as fast as you were running. This was not how you wanted it to end. Luckily this hall was shorter and had two different directions, which gave you a chance to escape him. Dashing past the doors, forgetting to even try them, you spun into the left hall, which was dimmer then any of the other halls, and took large, rapid strides down to the end, making another sharp turn, almost ramming your hip into the corner. That would be bad. You could just faintly make out the maniac's laughter and footsteps from where you were. Which gave you a slight sense of relief. You turn down one more hall, only to abruptly stop in your path. Your blood ran cold, your body froze up, and your (eye color) orbs grew wide.

Dead. End.

The sound of footsteps stopped right behind you, causing you to yelp and spin around, facing the brunette(?) male, his mouth and nose covered by some type of mouth guard, a design on it that looked like a metal smile. His hazel(?) eyes were covered by orange tinted goggles. His frightfully pale skin was mostly hidden by his hoodie, which was a light brown with striped sleeves. Ripped jeans covered his legs, and black and white converses covered his feet. He twitched, a causing a small tick noise to come from his cracking bones. He quickly wrapped his arms around you to keep you from falling to the ground, holding you close to his clothed chest, faces close together.

"Got you." He stated triumphantly, a grin plastered on his unseen lips. You burst out laughing, wrapping your arms around his neck.

"Next time, I want to chase you." You smirked. He chuckled.

"Maybe. Let's just get out of here and go get something to eat. All that running made me hungry." Toby complained, taking your hand with his gloved one, leading the way through the maze of hallways towards the exit.

"Fine. Where do you want to go?" You asked, wiping away the sweat from your forehead with your free hand. He hummed in thought before replying.


You both looked at each other, before bursting out into a fit of laughter, walking down the halls.

"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."


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MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
((I cracked up at that last part. 'But seriously, I want some fucking waffles.' BEST. LINE. EVER!!!))
Eriejaeger2015 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That was scaring the shit outa me till reader chan said "next time i want to chase u" i was like wtf
ThatAwkwardTeen Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
best one I read yet! (out of all your one shots) I love all your one shots!you bring the true character out. they're so different from all the one shots I've read in my life!
crazypancake16 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014  New member
I understand you Toby (well no my name is crazypancake)

Toby:I like the name
Badassninja137 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
oh god,.... GLORIOUS! *falls over laughing.* just the right mix of fluff and crazy. yes. all of my yes!!
ImInNeedOfCookies Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  New member
"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."
Me: *slow clapping*

I want waffles too tho... .-.
Solsilja24 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student Artist
I was gonna make waffles then i realize'd that i don't have a waffle iron, I was like "well......fuck" 
BlueKittyKat120 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  New member Hobbyist General Artist
WAFFELZ!!!!! I love the ending,Awesome!
CjIsTheBombie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
That was awesome! I really like that twist at the end!
TheLapisChicken Featured By Owner Edited Oct 7, 2014  Professional Writer
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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