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Sprinting down endless arrays of filth covered halls, grime covered the wooden walls, the floor was covered in dirt and littered with trash and splinters, which made you grateful that you had your shoes on. You turned corners and tried to open doors, only to find out they were all locked. Your breathing was heavy and ragged, since you've been running down this maze for what felt like hours, trying to find an exit. Sweat beaded down your forehead, drenching your face and soaking your hair. Your (color) converses thumped onto the ground each step you took, running deeper into the endless maze of halls in a building you weren't completely familiar with. All you know is that it has been abandon for about a few years. You ran towards another closed door, harshly twisting and turning the handle.

'C'mon, c'mon, c'mon!!' You scowled at the lock handle, slamming you fist against the wall.

"(NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEEE)~~~ COME OUT COME OUT WHERE EVER YOU ARE!!!!" You could feel the blood drain from your face as you heard a all too familiar male's voice call out, insanity lacing his every word, not to far from your location. You cursed, darting off from the opposite direction of his voice. A cackle echoed through out the building, causing you to involuntarily shiver. Adrenaline pumped through your veins, giving you a boost of energy. The sound of heavy, rapid footsteps neared the hall you were in, making you boost your speed towards the end of the long, dim corridor.

"(Nameee)... You can't run forever dear..." He was now in the hallway. That hatchet wielding psychopathic was now in the hall you just left a split second ago, gaining speed as fast as you were running. This was not how you wanted it to end. Luckily this hall was shorter and had two different directions, which gave you a chance to escape him. Dashing past the doors, forgetting to even try them, you spun into the left hall, which was dimmer then any of the other halls, and took large, rapid strides down to the end, making another sharp turn, almost ramming your hip into the corner. That would be bad. You could just faintly make out the maniac's laughter and footsteps from where you were. Which gave you a slight sense of relief. You turn down one more hall, only to abruptly stop in your path. Your blood ran cold, your body froze up, and your (eye color) orbs grew wide.

Dead. End.

The sound of footsteps stopped right behind you, causing you to yelp and spin around, facing the brunette(?) male, his mouth and nose covered by some type of mouth guard, a design on it that looked like a metal smile. His hazel(?) eyes were covered by orange tinted goggles. His frightfully pale skin was mostly hidden by his hoodie, which was a light brown with striped sleeves. Ripped jeans covered his legs, and black and white converses covered his feet. He twitched, a causing a small tick noise to come from his cracking bones. He quickly wrapped his arms around you to keep you from falling to the ground, holding you close to his clothed chest, faces close together.

"Got you." He stated triumphantly, a grin plastered on his unseen lips. You burst out laughing, wrapping your arms around his neck.

"Next time, I want to chase you." You smirked. He chuckled.

"Maybe. Let's just get out of here and go get something to eat. All that running made me hungry." Toby complained, taking your hand with his gloved one, leading the way through the maze of hallways towards the exit.

"Fine. Where do you want to go?" You asked, wiping away the sweat from your forehead with your free hand. He hummed in thought before replying.

"IHop."

You both looked at each other, before bursting out into a fit of laughter, walking down the halls.




















"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."

ONE-SHOT
Ahahahaaaa....


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gfrgtnhggt Featured By Owner 1 day ago
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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CandiProductions Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do not put chain mail/spam on my page. Thank You.
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xSutekinaTsuitachix Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Meanwhile in IHOP
-pulls Toby's mouth gaurs off a bit and drops a waffle in it and pours a bit of syrup in-
THERE YA GO :)
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BonnieGIRL832 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015
That scared me
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xinsanezx Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015  New Deviant
seriously i want some fucking waffles XD
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20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
This reminds me of a song by Hollywood undead.*thinks for a bit* OH! I remember. the song is called another way out.
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SecreterceS Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh gawd someone who actually knows them!!!
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20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015
I listen to them almost all the time.
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SecreterceS Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
I listen to lot of bands, but I love "Coming back down" and - as you said - Another way out.
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20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2015
Yeah.
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Shipping--Queen Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  New Deviant
I LOVE U i mean i love u for knowing Hollywood undead they r awesome
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20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015
Hell yeah That awesome
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20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2015
Make the that to they're. My phone is acting up for me right now.
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Ryuuichisan Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Student Writer
Wow, I did not see that plot twist. BUT GUUUUUUURL, that was amazing! Haha.
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fefe1966 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
But seriously, I want some effing waffles.
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Lolhate123 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Student Artist
LETS GET SOME FUCKIN WAFFLES BITCHES
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Iheartknucklejoe Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
YEAH!
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Lolhate123 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2015  Student Artist
Waffles fOR EVERYONE
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Iheartknucklejoe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
WAFFLEZ FOR EVERYONE EVERYDAY!!!
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Lolhate123 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Student Artist
I just pop um in the air oven for 4 minutes and eat them plain

It's like eating heaven
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Iheartknucklejoe Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Yep!
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katthesecurityguard Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
Let's get some freakin waffles guys
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deadlyrose12345 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2015
Bolt: -sighs- I should've done better at running... At lest climb to the cieling and hide above. Should have removable platforms or so..
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xxemokittyrealxx Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  New Deviant
What it said ok what do you want im like WAFFLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ticci-Senpai Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
Annnnnddddd plot twist of the century goes to, YOU!, AUTHOR-CHAN!!
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CandiProductions Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
YAAAAAY~!!!
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Ticci-Senpai Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
XD
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A-crimson-mess Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
My heart nearly stopped from the tension.
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:icona-crimson-mess:
A-crimson-mess Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
My heart nearly stopped from the tension.
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DarkKitty44 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015   Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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purpletabbycat Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is fucked up, I don't understand love like this.. or any love at all, why would be say that?
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CandiProductions Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope I don't sound rude, but please don't post chain mails and spam-related things on my deviations. I would appreciate it~
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desiredusername1098 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
lololololololololol 10 OUTTA 10
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Wolfy7980 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 9, 2015
Ticci Toby is meh fav creepypasta (5 stars there) YOUR ICON IS A MOCHI CHINA ARU! (5 stars there) (guess what you got 10 stars out of 10 stars have a peice of internet cake( would add cake picture thing but cant find were ypu add them :(. )
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CandiProductions Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay~!!
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SexyVampire102 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I was so worried for a min that it was going to have a plot twist and he was really going to kill her but then it turned into a game of cat and mouse wthout death involved. Very nice
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AmericaAteMyUsername Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015
I... Wow. To be honest... Unexpected. Nice job. Two thumbs up.
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ErenJaeger02 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When he said "I want food"  I thought I bet it's IHop And when it said that i was like "YAS CALLED IT!"
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Ticci-Senpai Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
Oh my freckled Jesus, it's Eren Freaking Jaeger. -Le AoT Salute-
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ErenJaeger02 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yo Waz up?! - Le salute-
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Ticci-Senpai Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
The sky.
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ErenJaeger02 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MEH GOD I NEVER KNEW! XD
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Ticci-Senpai Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015
IT'S AMAZING!
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ErenJaeger02 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
REALLY NOW! WATS IT LIKE
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Ticci-Senpai Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
It's so different!!
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It's always the fucking waffles
(I love yo icon btw :3)
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CandiProductions Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~!
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nerdygummybears13 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
XD
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flamePrincelover Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
What do you expect it is the one and only Toby
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tokoroth-of-chaos Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles." 
I laughed for literally ten minutes. :D
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