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Sprinting down endless arrays of filth covered halls, grime covered the wooden walls, the floor was covered in dirt and littered with trash and splinters, which made you grateful that you had your shoes on. You turned corners and tried to open doors, only to find out they were all locked. Your breathing was heavy and ragged, since you've been running down this maze for what felt like hours, trying to find an exit. Sweat beaded down your forehead, drenching your face and soaking your hair. Your (color) converses thumped onto the ground each step you took, running deeper into the endless maze of halls in a building you weren't completely familiar with. All you know is that it has been abandon for about a few years. You ran towards another closed door, harshly twisting and turning the handle.

'C'mon, c'mon, c'mon!!' You scowled at the lock handle, slamming you fist against the wall.

"(NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEEE)~~~ COME OUT COME OUT WHERE EVER YOU ARE!!!!" You could feel the blood drain from your face as you heard a all too familiar male's voice call out, insanity lacing his every word, not to far from your location. You cursed, darting off from the opposite direction of his voice. A cackle echoed through out the building, causing you to involuntarily shiver. Adrenaline pumped through your veins, giving you a boost of energy. The sound of heavy, rapid footsteps neared the hall you were in, making you boost your speed towards the end of the long, dim corridor.

"(Nameee)... You can't run forever dear..." He was now in the hallway. That hatchet wielding psychopathic was now in the hall you just left a split second ago, gaining speed as fast as you were running. This was not how you wanted it to end. Luckily this hall was shorter and had two different directions, which gave you a chance to escape him. Dashing past the doors, forgetting to even try them, you spun into the left hall, which was dimmer then any of the other halls, and took large, rapid strides down to the end, making another sharp turn, almost ramming your hip into the corner. That would be bad. You could just faintly make out the maniac's laughter and footsteps from where you were. Which gave you a slight sense of relief. You turn down one more hall, only to abruptly stop in your path. Your blood ran cold, your body froze up, and your (eye color) orbs grew wide.

Dead. End.

The sound of footsteps stopped right behind you, causing you to yelp and spin around, facing the brunette(?) male, his mouth and nose covered by some type of mouth guard, a design on it that looked like a metal smile. His hazel(?) eyes were covered by orange tinted goggles. His frightfully pale skin was mostly hidden by his hoodie, which was a light brown with striped sleeves. Ripped jeans covered his legs, and black and white converses covered his feet. He twitched, a causing a small tick noise to come from his cracking bones. He quickly wrapped his arms around you to keep you from falling to the ground, holding you close to his clothed chest, faces close together.

"Got you." He stated triumphantly, a grin plastered on his unseen lips. You burst out laughing, wrapping your arms around his neck.

"Next time, I want to chase you." You smirked. He chuckled.

"Maybe. Let's just get out of here and go get something to eat. All that running made me hungry." Toby complained, taking your hand with his gloved one, leading the way through the maze of hallways towards the exit.

"Fine. Where do you want to go?" You asked, wiping away the sweat from your forehead with your free hand. He hummed in thought before replying.

"IHop."

You both looked at each other, before bursting out into a fit of laughter, walking down the halls.




















"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."

ONE-SHOT
Ahahahaaaa....


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:icondesiredusername1098:
desiredusername1098 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
lololololololololol 10 OUTTA 10
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Wolfy7980 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 9, 2015
Ticci Toby is meh fav creepypasta (5 stars there) YOUR ICON IS A MOCHI CHINA ARU! (5 stars there) (guess what you got 10 stars out of 10 stars have a peice of internet cake( would add cake picture thing but cant find were ypu add them :(. )
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CandiProductions Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay~!!
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SexyVampire102 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I was so worried for a min that it was going to have a plot twist and he was really going to kill her but then it turned into a game of cat and mouse wthout death involved. Very nice
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AmericaAteMyUsername Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  New member
I... Wow. To be honest... Unexpected. Nice job. Two thumbs up.
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ErenJaeger02 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When he said "I want food"  I thought I bet it's IHop And when it said that i was like "YAS CALLED IT!"
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:icon0knightofheart0:
It's always the fucking waffles
(I love yo icon btw :3)
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~!
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nerdygummybears13 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
XD
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:iconflameprincelover:
flamePrincelover Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
What do you expect it is the one and only Toby
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:icontokoroth-of-chaos:
tokoroth-of-chaos Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles." 
I laughed for literally ten minutes. :D
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Dats a long time...
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:icontokoroth-of-chaos:
tokoroth-of-chaos Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2015
Yes, yes it is. Worth every minute. :)
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:icondamnkittyb:
damnkittyb Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015
someone should play will it waffle with ticci toby....
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:iconwolfy7980:
Wolfy7980 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015
YESSSSSSSSSSSS
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:icondamnkittyb:
damnkittyb Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
Yasssssss someone agrees!
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RebelWolficorn Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Who doesn't want some f*cking waffles? Seriously...
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2015  Student Writer
"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."

Died
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xxXLeafheartXxx Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
Omy! Lol I thought he would kill meh xD
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GirlMasky Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
PLOT TWIST.   Story was awesome
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Xxanime01xX Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
I loved it and Toby needs waffles.
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Lilasascha Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I will  give you waffles ! Hehehehehe 
my god I tought toby would kill me but no he was playing a game ! :T cuteeeee ! XD
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delilahdaredevil Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
VENTURIAN!!!!
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Hyper-active-girl Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
"But seriously I want some fucking waffles"

pfft- me to! 
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MoonlightHunter1012 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I rate this 10 ducks BEST LINE EVER AT LE END XDDEpic clap 
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MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2014
((I cracked up at that last part. 'But seriously, I want some fucking waffles.' BEST. LINE. EVER!!!))
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Eriejaeger2015 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That was scaring the shit outa me till reader chan said "next time i want to chase u" i was like wtf
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ThatAwkwardTeen Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
best one I read yet! (out of all your one shots) I love all your one shots!you bring the true character out. they're so different from all the one shots I've read in my life!
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crazypancake16 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
I understand you Toby (well no my name is crazypancake)



Toby:I like the name
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Badassninja137 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
oh ...my god,.... GLORIOUS! *falls over laughing.* just the right mix of fluff and crazy. yes. all of my yes!!
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ImInNeedOfCookies Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."
Me: *slow clapping*






I want waffles too tho... .-.
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DarkLync Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
:iconwaffleplz::iconwaffleplz:
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Solsilja24 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student Artist
I was gonna make waffles then i realize'd that i don't have a waffle iron, I was like "well......fuck" 
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BlueKittyKat120 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WAFFELZ!!!!! I love the ending,Awesome!
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CjIsTheBombie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
That was awesome! I really like that twist at the end!
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TheLapisChicken Featured By Owner Edited Oct 7, 2014  Professional Writer
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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CjIsTheBombie Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Girl Whispers: Chain mail isn't real.
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TheLapisChicken Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2014  Professional Writer
I know. Mt bro was on my account
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pastnavybrat95 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your lif
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BCthePPG Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Ah ha ha ha  awsome twist ending it's was scary but then the twist ending made me laugh cause how good it was, AWESOME JOB!
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TereziPyropeTheSeer Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That last sentence tho
XD
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DaringDash20 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dat sentence doe
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Cheesy-Candeh Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"But seriously, I want some fucking waffles."

Oh Lord that sentence x'D
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ReninWodsha Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Student Photographer
i died of the last sentence! xD
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Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
xD last sentence 
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LexiHuskyWolf Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2014  Student Writer
But that last sentence though XD
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DemigodSmartGirl Featured By Owner Edited Sep 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't ever interfere with Toby and his waffles...


It doesn't end well...
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Glitch3lf Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2014  Student
This was actually the best TT story. "I want some fucking waffles."
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CandiProductions Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Eheehe, thank you! ^w^
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