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LET ME LOVE YOU!
AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA Fem/Male reader- you choose
~Enjoy
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*(Name)'s P.O.V*

For some reason, lately you've been getting a strange feeling. That feeling that makes you shift from foot to foot uncomfortably, making the hairs on your neck rise and goosebumps chilling your arms. That feeling that makes you look around your surroundings because you feel eyes boring hole into you. You feel it almost 24/7. Sometimes, you would wake up at night because the feeling was so strong. You've been paranoid as well, triple checking to make sure every window, door was locked, even boarding up windows you never use, because you swear you here footsteps around your house. Sometimes, you catch a glimpse of a tan jacket or white out of the corner of your eye when your walking to and from home and school. You were seriously considering calling the police, but then again, you had no evidence to prove you were being stalked. Just strange feelings and noises.


Right now, it was 4:30, and you were walking home from a tiring day at school. You would be home sooner, but you were caught sleeping in class once again and had to stay for detention. Damn you English teacher... -.-

Anyways, you wore your (fav color) hoodie, hood up and trying to hide as much of yourself as possible, hoping whatever was stalking you wouldn't notice you. But strangely, you didn't feeling eyes on you. Not even the sound of faint footsteps, which usually makes you whirl around and check for anything suspicious. You weren't sure if you should be relieved or terrified. But it did make you walk faster, gripping the straps of your backpack tight enough to make your knuckles turn white.

Luckily, you didn't live quite too far from school, which you were grateful for. You sighed happily, watching your beloved home come into view. It would be better if your family was home more often... It was a shame your only sister, Candi, was moved out and living in her own home with her own life and family, and parents always going on those stupid business trips, which just pissed you off more. Why couldn't they get a job that stuck local, and not off in other cities and crap!? Oh well, ya can't get everything you want in life, even if you wished to.

You sighed, opening the front door after unlocking it and stepped in. All the lights were off, but it wasn't dark, sunlight streamed through the windows, keeping it lit up. But for some odd reason, it seemed a little too quiet...

You stood by the door for a few minutes, your left shoe just dangling off your foot from when you started taking it off like the other one. You scan the area with your eyes, not daring to make a movement. You looked at the kitchen, then the stairs, then the hallway that led to the living room. It seemed darker than the rest of the house, possibly because there was no windows in it. You blinked, shaking it off and pulling the shoe off, dropping you backpack against the wall. You went to the kitchen, quickly grabbing an apple and heading to the living room.

Entering the hallway, you took a turn, just about to enter the living room.

But froze.

Your (eye color) orbs widen, your body tensed up like a statue, apple up to your parted lips, one foot in front of the other, paused from your walk.

A male, in a tan jacket, a mask, with feminine features covered his face, some brown or brunette hair poking out from on top of his head. The curtains were drawn shut, making the living room dark like the hallway. He sat as still as you were on the couch. You couldn't even tell if he was breathing he was so still. You started to wonder if it was even a real person. Your apple dropped from your grasp to the floor. You took a step back, ready to run off and call the police. But the stranger must of caught your movements, because he lunged at you, as fast as possible. You let out a scream, running down the hall and out to the kitchen, him following.

"LET ME LOVE YOU (NAME)!!!!" He screamed, hands out stretched in front of him as he tried to grab you. You ran around the whole house, completely forgetting you own a fucking front door as he screamed the same sentence over and over.

"LET ME LOVE YOU! LET ME LOVE YOU! LET ME LOVE YOU!!" Eventually, it clicked in your head, to use the GAWD DAMN FRONT DOOR! and ran down the stairs, skipping three at a time. You lunged for the front door, hand gripping the door knob.

A force pushed you against the door, forcefully removing your hand from the knob. A chest pressed against your back, a head resting on your shoulder. Your throat hurt from screaming, so you could only pant, gulping air and your face was smashed against the door. Arms snaked around you waist. A dark chuckle rumbled from the masked figures chest and out his lips hidden under the mask.

"Your not going anywhere, until I show you my love (Name)..." He whispered, sending shivers through your spine, a whimper leaving your parched lips.

And he chuckled, snuggling you close to his chest like a teddy bear...
I regret nothing.

*Disclaimer*
Neffy: Candi owns nothing but the story and Candi!
Ness: Masky here belongs to Marble Hornets and You currently belong to Masky, or yourself if you don't want to be his. Which ever. ^.^
Candi: Woo! I don't own the preview image/GIF either.
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Damn, looking up GIFs gives me really good ideas for stories! I should do it more often!!

Thanks for reading~! Miku and Luka (Brofist) [V1] 
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:iconqwetu:
Qwetu Featured By Owner Edited 1 day ago  New Deviant
Me:*grins creepily at masky and says in a insane voice* "let me love you masky"
Masky:shit help mmmmeeee
HOOOODIEE *runs*
Me:*laughs BOSS FACE* hahaahahahHAHAHAHA NO ONE SHALL DEFEAT ME
Jeff the killer: ooooooh really
Me:fuck HELP ME MASKY *runs like the wind (XD)*
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Monique857410 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Student
Jackie: What teh hell...
Hoodie:*chases me* LOVE ME JACKIIIIIIEEEEE
Jackie:*running* NEVVVVAAA
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fefe1966 Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student Digital Artist
Naomi (ahem, that's me): MASKY, DAMMIT, OFFA ME...!

Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU!!!

Naomi: -hits upside the head with staff- Nope.
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deadlyrose12345 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
Shinda: -stares- Come any closer Masky and I'll set my elder sisters on you, and I'll turn into Split.
Masky: -shivers for a split second and looks down before looking up- LET ME LOVE YOU!!!
Shinda: Fuck.... EXECUTOR!! HEARTLESS!! HEEELLLLLLPPPP!! RRRRRAAAAPPPPPEEEE!!!!
Me and Heartless: -burst into the room and looks at the scene- SLENDER CONTROL YOUR DAMN PROXY BEFORE WE BEHEAD HIM!
Masky and Hoodie: LET US LOVE YOU!!! -tackles Shinda-
Shinda: I'm fucked... And I cannot find my masks damn it...AND HOODIE WHEN DID YOU ENTER THE SCENE?!?!?
Hoodie: LET ME LOVE YOU!!!
Me: -drags Hoodie and Masky out the room while Heartless follows with her knives in hand- Slender was late to control his proxies.
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daddysgirl12343 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2015
Me: O.o *steps back slightly*
Masky: *lunges* LET ME LOVE YOU
Me: *runs* NOPE.NOPE.NOPE.NOPE. *runs to room* *calls Austria (the big brother of my hetalia OC czechoslavakia)* RODDY THERE IS A MASKED PERSON IN MY HOUSE TRYING TO RAAPPPE MEEEEEE!!!
Austria: And.......?
Me: *hears crash* I think he just broke the piano.
Austria: *busts through the front door with a bazooka* YOU BROKE THE PIANO. PREPARE TO DIE
Masky: meep. *flees the house with austria and hungary chasing him*
Jeff: *sits in the corner of my room*
Me: wait who are you??
Jeff: -my name's jeaff-
Me: okay... O.o
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:iconarminjay:
ArminJay Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015  New Deviant
ILL LET U LOVE MEH IF YOU CALM DA FUQ DOWN BRUH!! CALM THE FUCK DOWN NOW!!
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:iconmayajones18:
Mayajones18 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  New Deviant
Me: oh ok I'll let you love me but can I get changed first?
Masky: *lets me go* oh of course
Me: *starts walking towards room but as soon as I'm out of eye sight breaks into a sprint and locks bedroom door* oh my god *calls slenderman and whispers* daddy there's a guy with brown hair and he's wearing a mask with black feminine features help me please
Slender: *sighs* ok I'll be there now
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After slender arrived he grabbed masky told him that he couldn't do anything to me and teleported him and masky back to slender mansion
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:iconremlitmilo:
RemlitMilo Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Student Artist
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU, MILA!!!!!!
Me: *sits down and crosses arms* fine.
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:iconroybin:
roybin Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 year
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:iconladymarblekiller:
LadyMarbleKiller Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015  New Deviant
*callz up slenda-bruh* DAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THERE'S A SRANGE BRUNETTE TRYNA RAPE ME! D:<
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:iconkitkatskullthefox:
KitKatSkullTheFox Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
SHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIZZZZZZ MASKYZ GONNA RAPE MEH >^<
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:iconthe-demon-life-blood:
the-demon-life-blood Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Please sequel. Pllleeaassseee!!!!!!!!
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:iconnekominecrafter:
NekoMinecrafter Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
media.giphy.com/media/tB5wFz4d…
*sees masky*
*makes a small move*
*masky lunges*
LET ME LOVE YOU!!!
*sprints*
NOPE! YOU CAN FUCKING LOVE LIZ! BUT NOT ME!
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dashie1437 Featured By Owner May 10, 2015
Me:masky come to fuck down
Mask:LET ME LOVE U
Me:slendy help new please
Slendy:okay child *clears throught*masky leave this child alone
Masky:let me love u
Me:fuck u
Masky and hoodie:LET ME LOVE U
Me:where did u come from hoodie
Hoodie:LET ME LOVE U
ME:THIs GOING tO BE A lONG NIGHT😰
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:iconkingdomheartsfan109:
Kingdomheartsfan109 Featured By Owner May 10, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
A sequel would be amazing though.....
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:iconmanistyr:
Manistyr Featured By Owner May 7, 2015
It was cool!! Can you write a sequel? Or another fic like this, I will apreciate very much. Thank you!
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:iconunintentionalboobage:
UnintentionalBoobage Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Now the question is, are we (collectively as the reader), being viciously murdered, or is he just our personaloverenthusiastic stalker?
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Not sure. I guess that's up to you~
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:iconblademasterbubblegum:
blademasterbubblegum Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Well.... That escalated quickly.
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah...

Crappy story is crappy- /slapped
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:iconcreepypastalemonlove:
creepypastalemonlove Featured By Owner May 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Da fuck chill down mate
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:iconbre4nn3:
BRE4NN3 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Student General Artist
0-0 *pulls gun out* stay back masky or you get a bullet to the head *walks out slowly* that was an amazing story
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:iconlaughingalanna:
LaughingAlanna Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2015  New Deviant Student Filmographer
So AWSOME!
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:iconkitkatskullthefox:
KitKatSkullTheFox Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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:icona-crimson-mess:
A-crimson-mess Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
They're fake things that people make to tick you off. Don't listen or pay attention to them.
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:iconkitkatskullthefox:
KitKatSkullTheFox Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
thats what i do now. so yeah
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:icona-crimson-mess:
A-crimson-mess Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Srsly?
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:icona-crimson-mess:
A-crimson-mess Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Srsly?
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:iconkitkatskullthefox:
KitKatSkullTheFox Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
okay. that was in the past. i dont believe those things anymore.
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:icona-crimson-mess:
A-crimson-mess Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you dont
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't like chainmails. Please don't put them on my stuff. No harsh feelings.
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:iconkitkatskullthefox:
KitKatSkullTheFox Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
I had no choice.... =^=
Im sorry....
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:icondramallamaxx:
DramaLlamaxx Featured By Owner May 18, 2015
You didn't have a choice? -.- bullshit 
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:iconnekominecrafter:
NekoMinecrafter Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
... You do realize you wont get bad luck from not posting these... right?
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:iconkitkatskullthefox:
KitKatSkullTheFox Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015
I didn't want bad luck...
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:icondeadlydakota21:
DeadlyDakota21 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist
I wouldn't have run I would be like I'M RIGHT HERE :D
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:iconsexyvampire102:
SexyVampire102 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
oh gosh that was crazy great lol
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:iconamericaatemyusername:
AmericaAteMyUsername Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015
HOLY SCHIZZ NUGGETS. I JUST GOT GLOMPED BY MASKY.
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:iconjustareader41:
justareader41 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2015
:thumb440251593:
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:iconshadowshredder:
ShadowShredder Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
To be honest, I would really like to see a sequel to this. If you have time for it that is~
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:iconninjamonkey66:
ninjamonkey66 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
well if this we really me it would be the other way aroundNickderp Swiggity Swooty, Foxy's Comin 4 Booty (Chat Icon) 
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Crimsonpikachumanga Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015   General Artist
Yeah same ^^'
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:iconnoregrets029:
noregrets029 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
=_=
-slowly paps Masky-
Down boy... now is not the time for me to let you live me...
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:iconcrazypancake16:
crazypancake16 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2015
when I heard GAWD DAMN FRONT DOOR I thought "HAVE YOU PEOPLE EVER HEARD OF CLOSING THE GOD DAMN DOOR NO!"
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2pBloodyCanadia Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
YAY A PANIC AT THE DISCO FAN (Right?)
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:iconcrazypancake16:
crazypancake16 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015
((Well I've heard the song it's very popular im getting into them))
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:icon2pbloodycanadia:
2pBloodyCanadia Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
( Good they're amazing)
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:iconcrazypancake16:
crazypancake16 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
((Well then
i picked the right band:3)
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:icon2pbloodycanadia:
2pBloodyCanadia Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
(Indeed)
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:iconcrazypancake16:
crazypancake16 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015
((I also like mcr and fob)
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