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LET ME LOVE YOU!
AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA Fem/Male reader- you choose
~Enjoy
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*(Name)'s P.O.V*

For some reason, lately you've been getting a strange feeling. That feeling that makes you shift from foot to foot uncomfortably, making the hairs on your neck rise and goosebumps chilling your arms. That feeling that makes you look around your surroundings because you feel eyes boring hole into you. You feel it almost 24/7. Sometimes, you would wake up at night because the feeling was so strong. You've been paranoid as well, triple checking to make sure every window, door was locked, even boarding up windows you never use, because you swear you here footsteps around your house. Sometimes, you catch a glimpse of a tan jacket or white out of the corner of your eye when your walking to and from home and school. You were seriously considering calling the police, but then again, you had no evidence to prove you were being stalked. Just strange feelings and noises.


Right now, it was 4:30, and you were walking home from a tiring day at school. You would be home sooner, but you were caught sleeping in class once again and had to stay for detention. Damn you English teacher... -.-

Anyways, you wore your (fav color) hoodie, hood up and trying to hide as much of yourself as possible, hoping whatever was stalking you wouldn't notice you. But strangely, you didn't feeling eyes on you. Not even the sound of faint footsteps, which usually makes you whirl around and check for anything suspicious. You weren't sure if you should be relieved or terrified. But it did make you walk faster, gripping the straps of your backpack tight enough to make your knuckles turn white.

Luckily, you didn't live quite too far from school, which you were grateful for. You sighed happily, watching your beloved home come into view. It would be better if your family was home more often... It was a shame your only sister, Candi, was moved out and living in her own home with her own life and family, and parents always going on those stupid business trips, which just pissed you off more. Why couldn't they get a job that stuck local, and not off in other cities and crap!? Oh well, ya can't get everything you want in life, even if you wished to.

You sighed, opening the front door after unlocking it and stepped in. All the lights were off, but it wasn't dark, sunlight streamed through the windows, keeping it lit up. But for some odd reason, it seemed a little too quiet...

You stood by the door for a few minutes, your left shoe just dangling off your foot from when you started taking it off like the other one. You scan the area with your eyes, not daring to make a movement. You looked at the kitchen, then the stairs, then the hallway that led to the living room. It seemed darker than the rest of the house, possibly because there was no windows in it. You blinked, shaking it off and pulling the shoe off, dropping you backpack against the wall. You went to the kitchen, quickly grabbing an apple and heading to the living room.

Entering the hallway, you took a turn, just about to enter the living room.

But froze.

Your (eye color) orbs widen, your body tensed up like a statue, apple up to your parted lips, one foot in front of the other, paused from your walk.

A male, in a tan jacket, a mask, with feminine features covered his face, some brown or brunette hair poking out from on top of his head. The curtains were drawn shut, making the living room dark like the hallway. He sat as still as you were on the couch. You couldn't even tell if he was breathing he was so still. You started to wonder if it was even a real person. Your apple dropped from your grasp to the floor. You took a step back, ready to run off and call the police. But the stranger must of caught your movements, because he lunged at you, as fast as possible. You let out a scream, running down the hall and out to the kitchen, him following.

"LET ME LOVE YOU (NAME)!!!!" He screamed, hands out stretched in front of him as he tried to grab you. You ran around the whole house, completely forgetting you own a fucking front door as he screamed the same sentence over and over.

"LET ME LOVE YOU! LET ME LOVE YOU! LET ME LOVE YOU!!" Eventually, it clicked in your head, to use the GAWD DAMN FRONT DOOR! and ran down the stairs, skipping three at a time. You lunged for the front door, hand gripping the door knob.

A force pushed you against the door, forcefully removing your hand from the knob. A chest pressed against your back, a head resting on your shoulder. Your throat hurt from screaming, so you could only pant, gulping air and your face was smashed against the door. Arms snaked around you waist. A dark chuckle rumbled from the masked figures chest and out his lips hidden under the mask.

"Your not going anywhere, until I show you my love (Name)..." He whispered, sending shivers through your spine, a whimper leaving your parched lips.

And he chuckled, snuggling you close to his chest like a teddy bear...
I regret nothing.

*Disclaimer*
Neffy: Candi owns nothing but the story and Candi!
Ness: Masky here belongs to Marble Hornets and You currently belong to Masky, or yourself if you don't want to be his. Which ever. ^.^
Candi: Woo! I don't own the preview image/GIF either.
~~~

Damn, looking up GIFs gives me really good ideas for stories! I should do it more often!!

Thanks for reading~! Miku and Luka (Brofist) [V1] 
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:iconmusicalnotes123:
Musicalnotes123 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student General Artist
Just be happy he's not streaking
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Yes, at least he has his clothes on xD
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:iconmusicalnotes123:
Musicalnotes123 Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student General Artist
Yes, indeed
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:iconchibilover1998:
chibilover1998 Featured By Owner 4 days ago
No! 'Hides behind E.J.' help me I'm scared.
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:iconlinapoppy:
LinaPoppy Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  New member Student Traditional Artist
*Ying while being chased by masky* NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII Mistletoe chase 
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:iconfioleeforever4:
FiOlEeFoReVeR4 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Student Artist
XD lol!!! I CAN STOP LAUGHING!!!
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:iconben-drowneds-girl:
BEN-Drowneds-Girl Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU
Me: *hides behind Alex Kralie* nu
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:iconmoonlighthunter1012:
MoonlightHunter1012 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2015  New member Student Artist
wait wouldnt alex kill you my der friend 
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:iconimjustpassingthrough:
LET ME LOVE YOU!




..
-Throws brick- 
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconclapplz:
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:iconimjustpassingthrough:
Thank you! Thank you! 
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:iconanimegeek1235:
animegeek1235 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
Let me love you now there so manly way to love ya~
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:iconnotokiandothers:
NotokiAndOthers Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
(how it would be if it was me)
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU
Me: what was that. it was probably the wind, i should close the window
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU! LET ME LOVE YOU! LET ME LOVE YOU!
Me: Okay i love you, LAPTOP
Masky: SENPAI NOTICE ME!!
Me: i notice you, GLOVE! Persian Derp 
(that's what my brother does to me. i'll say hi then he will be like "Hi, CHAIR")
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:iconmoonlighthunter1012:
MoonlightHunter1012 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  New member Student Artist
XDD 
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:iconthe-unrealistic:
The-UnRealIstic Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  New member Student Digital Artist
lol
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:icondaeviltwins:
DaEvilTwins Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  New member Professional Filmographer
Sammy: HOLY NOODLESMangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed Mangle nosebleed Freddy Nosebleed Nosebleed Nosebleed Freddy Nosebleed 
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:iconpredatrokata:
Predatrokata Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014
Goddamn, why must parents awlays left on bussiness trips, so the killer (or the whoever is coming for you) is like "Yay look, a girl with noone else in the house" and peacefully rape you. that face XD that face XD that face XD that face XD that face XD 
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:iconsongwolf11:
songwolf11 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
OMG 😂😂😂😂
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:iconmoonlighthunter1012:
MoonlightHunter1012 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  New member Student Artist
Masky : LET ME LOVE YOU Let me hug you!  
ME : NUUU *runs away*Run Away 
Masky : *chases me*Chase 
Me : *slams face into door* GOD DAMMITIsuzu Slamming Head Icon 
Masky : *Bear Hugs me * <3 I LOVE CHU MOON Natsuki Shinomiya (Super hug) [V1] 
Me : -_-"I love you too maskyPikachu sighs 
Masky : *Cuddles harder* <<<3hug 
Me :  help meUUGH 
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:iconlowlabunnee:
LowlaBunnee Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014
I literally died
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:icontheromanticphantom:
TheRomanticPhantom Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  New member Hobbyist Writer
XD
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:iconmoonlighthunter1012:
MoonlightHunter1012 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  New member Student Artist
Thank you thank you very much *Elvis Presley voice*
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:iconlittleatlantis:
LittleAtlantis Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU
Me: **turns into a cat and hops onto his lap** There =w=
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:iconrallicrossoverh2:
RaLLiCrossoverH2 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014
Oh gosh
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:iconstitchedjester:
StitchedJester Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
LET ME LOVE YOU!




No.
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:iconcandiproductions:
CandiProductions Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This comment is the best because its not the same as all the others I have on this deviation. *gives you a gold star*
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:iconstitchedjester:
StitchedJester Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I feel so special. QwQ
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:iconbluekitten06:
BlueKitten06 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU!
me: -runs away- no! Don't you dare hu- -gets hugged- -.- I hate you
Masky: -huggles-
Me: ....
Satoru: .... -pulls me away- She's mine...
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  New member Student Digital Artist
I died from this XD
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:iconjess-the-killer-girl:
jess-the-killer-girl Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Student Artist
I laughed way to hard //hugs kk because I want to//

Karkat:what are you doing?

Loving you?
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:iconkorbynluvsthehaters:
KorbynLuvsTheHaters Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Terezi: *Slaps you then grabs karkat.* M1N3 B1SH. *EGts on a magic dragon and flys away*

Me: *Watches* Seems legit.
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:iconjess-the-killer-girl:
jess-the-killer-girl Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2015  Student Artist
*blinks a few times* that happened.......
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:icondjdiamond:
DJDiamond Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wahhhhhh! Halp...... Heheh
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:iconfirestar0406:
Firestar0406 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*SHET
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:iconfirestar0406:
Firestar0406 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HILY SHEY MASKY CHILL
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:iconicefang1828:
IceFang1828 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Me: No hugs!!! I don't like hugs!! *pushes masky off*

Melody: Too bad, so sad. *pushes masky back unto me*

Me: nuuuuuuuu!!!! ME NO LIKEY HUGGGSSSS!!!! TYSON HALP!!!

Tyson: Ummm... *backs away slowly*

Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU ROSIE!!!

Me: NAW!!! I'm already married to someone else!!! He is just at the mall Christmas shopping because he doesn't trust me in the mall...
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:iconmoonlightthewolfdrag:
Masky:*pops head out behind door and shouts* LET ME LOVE YOU MOON
Me: NEIN MASKY NEIN *slams bedroom door shut*
Masky:*pops up behind me and bear hugs me* LET ME LOVE YOU MOON <3
Me:*grumbles cussing*
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:iconcrazypancake16:
crazypancake16 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
Masky:love me
Me:cousin jeff!!! Help meh!
Jeff:no
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU
Me: NUUUUU *runs into the kitchen*
Masky:*runs into the kitchen* COME HERE
Me: AWWWWWW HELL NAW! *picks up giant ass fridge and holds it above head*
Masky: *backs away slowly* don't do anything hasty......
Me: *slams fridve onto hks head* YOURE JUST AS BAD AS FRANCE, YOU PERVERSE DUMBLEDORE DILDO!
masky: *holding his head*
Me: *dropkicks him out the window* BUH-BYE NOW, HAVE A NICE FUCKIN FLIGHT!
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:iconxxisumenasumokoxx:
XxIsumeNasumokoxX Featured By Owner Edited Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
me: *looks at Masky from out the window* .....Rest in Peace
Masky: Fuck you *flips me off*
me: Well thats what you get for going after Reader Chan.
Masky: I just want to love her!!
me: *face palms* you never learn.....
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Me: So you just want love?
Masky: yeah...
Me: Do you want a hug?
Masky: Yes....and how about a bit more *wink wink*
Me:punches him in the head along with hoodie*
Me/Hoodie: NO!
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:iconxxisumenasumokoxx:
XxIsumeNasumokoxX Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Zack: well then Masky there is your answer..
Masky: damn you all..... *passes out*
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Me : *chucks him into the front yard*
Hoodie what th-
Me: shush. *walks outside and puts on cleats*
hoodie: well this can't be good....
Me: *dropkicks him to china* I AM THE GREAT AND POWERFUL SMILEY AND I BELONG TO TOBY NOT YOU
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:iconxxisumenasumokoxx:
XxIsumeNasumokoxX Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Zack: Nice.
Toby: Remind me to never piss you off
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:iconpoetry-venting:
Poetry-Venting Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Me: *turns to toby* oh hi! just taking out some garbage. now i need a shower.
Toby: okay! *secret smirk*
Me:*grabs my towel and walks in, locking the door*
Toby: *waits till he hears the shower* *picks lock and walks in*
Me: *throws him onto slendy* SLENDY HE'S TRYING TO RAPE ME AGAIN
Toby: *runs away* NO NO IM SORRY
ME: LOVE YOU! *waves*
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XxIsumeNasumokoxX Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Zack: *tries to hide a giggle* ..oooh....my..*pfft* god
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:iconxxsweets-and-soulsxx:
xXSweets-And-SoulsXx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Masky: LET ME LOVE YOU!!
Reader: AHHHHHH!! ;A;
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:iconultimategamer103:
UltimateGamer103 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014  Student Artist
E.R: *Laughs* This is So priceless! Masky screaming 'LET ME LOVE YOU' Masky you out done it this time! xD Good story!
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:iconryugaandkyoyagirl:
ryugaandkyoyagirl Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Student Artist
me-MASKY LET ME GO !
Masky-cant we have some fun?
me-NO HODDIE HELP ME!
*hoddie comes in and slams masky on a wall*hoddie -BACK OFF
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